Some people consider sport to be their career in society. For others, it is mostly a workout to keep fit.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Over the past decades, sports have had a growing influence in the modern world, which could be even seen as a job or a hobby. While for many people, sports are the activities to keep them in shape, however, there are some who have occupations related to sports. Personally, I am on the majority side and in this essay, I will discuss both opinions.
On one hand, sports professionals are those who have a huge passion for sports. They can use their talent to earn money for daily payments and furthermore is the fame. For instance, Messi or Ronaldo, who is a brilliant footballer, had enormous possession by playing football for several years and had become the symbols of the football world. Moreover, sports players can bring glory to their nation through international games like the Olympics. Take Anh Vien for example, she is the champion of SEA GAME 2005 which helped Vietnam get the first gold medal in swimming after ten years of waiting.
On the other hand, not all people have the ability to become a professor in physical activities, so they just see it as a pleasure. The most persuasive reason for the popularity of sports is the player can improve both mental and physical health. If soccer or tennis can provide a shaped body and strength, so yoga and meditation can bring the relaxing and release stress. In addition, playing sports not only helps the children to improve their height and weight but also chase the diseases away from the elder.
In conclusion, I have discussed both views and given my opinion. The careers related to sports can make the employee rich and famous, however, for those who don’t have the talent to do them, just see them as a hobby that provides a healthy lifestyle to the players.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72607260726 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48936348976 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597359735974 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3978161489 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.285714286 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78571428571 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227953358043 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767400470311 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473624337319 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132940457832 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196652068521 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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