Nowadays, parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed. What is the reason for doing this? Is this a negative or positive development?
Nurturing and educating children are ongoing problem as well as hot topic in society. Unfortunately parents always control and determine the success of their children, which resulted in some challenges hashes to gain some achievements. In this essays I will argue that the major reason of these pressures is ambition of the adults, resulting in some drawbacks of the children's growth.
Parents are older than children so they have more and more experience and some defeats when comparing to the younger. The adults always demand their sons or daughters follow their footstep and they believe that will be a smooth way to gain the success. Moreover in some situation that children have no choice on the majors even their works in the future. The odors force them to the things those things which are the best and suitable one. Because of the incomplete dreams as well as unlikelihood aspirations, parents make many tasks assignments to their children. They are looking for their children's the better life and put too much pressure on them.
The more pressures the children have, the negative maturing they will be. To begin with, the behavior and attitude of one child depend on the background around. The children can be not creative as well as passive if they are controlled by their parents and have a lot of pressure. Furthermore, their performance is directly affected by the other decisions. The main effect is the last of that direction. For instance they do not have any selection in the future and some people in favor of these children are not successful as other one with a positive and optimistic background.
To sum up my essay has explained the major reason why the parents are getting put some difficulties on their children which lead to some drawback of the trend given. In my point of view, people should take much more time and concern to evaluate as well as consider the pros and cons of the trend carefully.
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Suggestion: Moreover,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, well, for instance, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8696969697 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5900937934 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2378963981 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5294117647 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4117647059 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47058823529 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2722436925 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084458251532 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724278415905 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158525197011 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299512884341 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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