Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st Century, and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates.
What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions.
Global warming is by far one of the biggest concerns for mankind as it is posing numerous threats to humans as well as planet earth. This essay will discuss some problems associated with the rising of sea levels, a risk accelerated by global warming, as well as look at ways by which this issue can be curtailed.
Sea levels rising at a phenomenal rate have resulted in various negative effects on our planet. Firstly, increases in water levels shrinks productive soil area for cultivation. When soil is covered in salt water, its sanility rises, which greatly affects the productivity of crop plants because most of them are sensitive to sanility. Secondly, increases in sea water unbalances ecosystem due to changes in habitat. Rises in the amount of salt water leads to expansion of habitat for salt water plants and animals while reduce habitat for creatures that only survive in fresh water or live entirely on land.
However, there are some steps that both individuals and the government can take to mitigate these problems and most of them are to deal with global warming. Government should make sure that all citizens adhere to environmental regulations such as always separate garbage before it goes to the bin,etc. Furthermore, tax on single use plastic bag should be imposed to reduce the consumption of this materials. In regards to individuals, one should always try to minimize their negative effects on the environment. There are a number of ways one can go about it such as always turn off electric devices when not in use; try not to waste food; reduce non recycled material consumption, etc.
Overall, even though global warming in general and water level rising in particular are presenting serious problems to the world, various means can be taken to diminish these effects. It is crucial that both individuals and government work together in this venture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, look, second, secondly, so, well, while, in general, in particular, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03194888179 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65596494368 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578274760383 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9436465281 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215334239899 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703696092388 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714081479351 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140386706699 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0946277388015 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.