Science could not help people to live 100 or 200 years . What are good or bad development. Discussion both view and give your own opinion.?
Scientic cannot assist individual are survive to grow up to hundred and twenty years on earth. there have plethora reasons behind this. I will discuss both view and give my suggest for about in upcoming paragraph.
First and foremest, I am argree that today technology has develop plenty things for the next generation and even who can't face difficult in their own life. After that, science have provide so many benefits for the youth . For instance, communication skills , long distance maintain regarding to internet. Education level. Moreover, some people have poverty so they cannot afford high fees to learning for new skill can easily to social sites because there have available all kind of information on network area like course, degree, cook and extra.
On the flip side, science cloud not give birth either dead anyone but also they have right to Lord who should living in planet.However, adolescents might follow health diet instead of who will live long life on earth. Otherwise, in these day youngerster have taking over stress in any activities nor could not enjoy events. For example, function, vacation, festivals and ocassions. Last but not the least, they can't find happiness in little thing as far as major effect on body physical, mental or social it's bad impact. Thus, nowadays people can't cross 100 neither 200 years.
To conclude, science can proof technology for every years . On the other hand who live long in planet it depend on people diet to eat health and reduce their tension level.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, for example, for instance, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04365079365 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42109148272 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.714285714286 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6150614824 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7857142857 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175474745611 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496432252031 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048106311741 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103214559763 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313698301465 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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