In recent times, more ATC students are disappointed from the faculty's training program, because the subjects of economics and mathematics are an obsession for foreign language students. According to the recent announcement of Banking Academy, the foreign language department changes the program according to the new output standards and some subjects will be changed. As a result, students face challenges related to registering subjects and learning. However, in my opinion, studying for the ATC program is not entirely a bad choice.
There are two main reasons I want to support my point of view. The first reason is that students have a good foundation not only in specialized language but also in economic knowledge through ATC training program. Addition to English skills in terms of listening, speaking, reading and writing, students can enhance their knowledge of economic subjects and history subjects. The ATC program helps students receive different subjects and diverse forms of study. Moreover, learning the language along with the knowledge of finance and banking supports them to have more decisions for their future jobs.
Moreover, the ATC program establishes a wide range of electives by major besides the required subjects. Through electives, students can easily choose subjects according to their strengths. and have a clear orientation to arrange a timetable for learning. In addition, students feel comfortable and confident when learning foreign language skills as well as major electives according to their personal interests and perspectives. Thanks to the diversity of subjects, students can develop strengths and raise awareness.
Some students argue that math and economics are not needed in the ATC curriculum and that they feel bad about enrolling in this language department. However, if students only specialize in languages, they are unlikely to have many opportunities as well as future career choices. Knowledge of foreign languages along with financial and economic background will be an extremely solid foundation to help students get stable jobs and opportunities for advancement.Students should actively research the curriculum of the department before applying to the university. Moreover, students should find many different solutions to be able to face difficult subjects.
In conclusion, foreign language background along with knowledge of economics and a wide choice of subjects are the two main factors that make students realize that the ATC program is an excellent option. Although studying in different majors is an individual viewpoint of students, they should consider majors that give them more opportunities after graduation.
In recent times, more ATC students are disappointed from the faculty's training program, because the subjects of economics and mathematics are an obsession for foreign language students. According to the recent announcement of Banking Academy, the foreign language department changes the program according to the new output standards and some subjects will be changed. As a result, students face challenges related to registering subjects and learning. However, in my opinion, studying for the ATC program is not entirely a bad choice.
There are two main reasons I want to support my point of view. The first reason is that students have a good foundation not only in specialized language but also in economic knowledge through ATC training program. Addition to English skills in terms of listening, speaking, reading and writing, students can enhance their knowledge of economic subjects and history subjects. The ATC program helps students receive different subjects and diverse forms of study. Moreover, learning the language along with the knowledge of finance and banking supports them to have more decisions for their future jobs.
Moreover, the ATC program establishes a wide range of electives by major besides the required subjects. Through electives, students can easily choose subjects according to their strengths. and have a clear orientation to arrange a timetable for learning. In addition, students feel comfortable and confident when learning foreign language skills as well as major electives according to their personal interests and perspectives. Thanks to the diversity of subjects, students can develop strengths and raise awareness.
Some students argue that math and economics are not needed in the ATC curriculum and that they feel bad about enrolling in this language department. However, if students only specialize in languages, they are unlikely to have many opportunities as well as future career choices. Knowledge of foreign languages along with financial and economic background will be an extremely solid foundation to help students get stable jobs and opportunities for advancement.Students should actively research the curriculum of the department before applying to the university. Moreover, students should find many different solutions to be able to face difficult subjects.
In conclusion, foreign language background along with knowledge of economics and a wide choice of subjects are the two main factors that make students realize that the ATC program is an excellent option. Although studying in different majors is an individual viewpoint of students, they should consider majors that give them more opportunities after graduation.
- Each everyone has freedom rights to living and falling in love Some people think that falling in love while studying is not a good idea Personally i totally agree with that point of view because it may brings positive experiences and changes to students F 56
- Whether college students should fall in love or not Some people suppose that it brings bad impacts on students However in reality having a relationship during university time can bring more advantages such as improving mental health and boosting study mot 78
- Love is a necessary flavor in life and no matter how beautiful or painful it is it is still worth cherishing and keeping And college education is the most beautiful YOUth of all student love is extremely beneficial since it allows students to grow up have 67
- It is a good idea to fall in love in college For a long time that issue has been a contentious topic Some argue that students should start a relationship while others argue that it is harmful Personally I completely agree with the view of having love in t 56
- Topic It is a good idea to fall in love in college To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Two successive sentences begin with the same adverb. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... more decisions for their future jobs. Moreover, the ATC program establishes a wide ran...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
... subjects according to their strengths. and have a clear orientation to arrange a t...
^^^
Line 4, column 460, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Students
... jobs and opportunities for advancement.Students should actively research the curriculum...
^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 593, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...versity. Moreover, students should find many different solutions to be able to face difficult ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2279.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 404.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64108910891 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9774449884 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480198019802 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 691.2 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5410625126 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.95 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.470848917703 0.244688304435 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139988526178 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148755990118 0.0667982634062 223% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277769471488 0.151304729494 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.167512637017 0.056905535591 294% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.43 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.