Nowadays, many animal species are becoming extinct. Some people believe that countries and individuals must solve this problem, others believe that humans being are more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Modern civilization is witnessing the loss of certain species across the globe. For the sake of nature, there are advocates for the view that animal protection should be taken into thorough consideration whereas critics assert that humans being must be high on the agenda. I would concede that mankind's society should be prioritized over other creatures.
For one thing, the animal rights proponents may believe that human function based on the coexistence with nature and the demise of those species could result in ecological crisis. It is true that animals play an indispensable significant role in our lives in farming and agriculture. Not only it is an ample source of food providing nutrients but also some of them act as driving forces for biodiversity to thrive. For instance, bees shoulder the duty of provoking the process of pollination, which contributes to a diverse flora system. Undoubtedly, the today’s world scenario would be very different had one of them completely disappeared, leaving alone the gradual environmental degradation.
For another, I believe that the civilian’s lives should be held in higher esteem. As a matter of fact, it would be useless if any effort and resources allocated to the preservation do not come along with guaranteeing our survival. In other words, steps should be taken in accordance with benefits for human society. Regardless of whether several creatures are at the verge of extinction, we should only intervene in or disrupt the cycle of nature unless they are the victims of mankind’s progress. Hence, it is reasonable to accept the loss of the ecosystem to a certain degree since our abilities are incompatible to prevent all the tragedies that it brings about.
To conclude, animal protection is crucial and deserves additional attention. Nonetheless, humans being must be ensured and highlighted in this era for the sake of our recent life and in a larger context, our generation.
- Studies show that crime rates are lower among those with educational degrees Therefore the best way to reduce the crime rate is to educate criminals while they are still in prison To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- Crime rates will fall as advances in technology make it easier to detect and prevent crimes To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- Some claim that men are naturally more competitive than women To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- Nowadays many animal species are becoming extinct Some people believe that countries and individuals must solve this problem others believe that humans being are more important Discuss both views and give your own opinion 84
- Crime rates will fall as advances in technology make it easier to detect and prevent crimes To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, nonetheless, so, whereas, for instance, as a matter of fact, for one thing, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22929936306 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97081698869 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608280254777 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5592022714 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.466666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9333333333 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161903357282 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516532458178 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044240436065 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104898515646 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275404915427 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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