Your friend is in another country. Write a letter to your friend asking for advice about employment opportunities in his country.
In your letter, you should say:
-why you want to work there
-what skills and work experience you have
-inquire about details, such as salary, benefits, and hours
Dear Durgesh,
I hope you are doing great. It's been over six months that we have spoken to each other, yet I feel like it was only yesterday due to our busy schedule life. You would love to know that I just develop my interest to come to New Orleans for new employment opportunities, and I was hoping you would walk me through to complete my interest.
The reason I want to move to the US is because due to versatile opportunities for engineers. Plus, it has two prominent advantages in providing better lifestyle such as financial growth and healthy-balanced life. With these two reasons my interest got developed for foreign job options, and you are the only friend I have in the US that could guide me to get a job in the USA.
I am working as a Data Engineer for the past decade with different multinational companies such as HCL, instantsys, and Amazon. I have a skillset of building data models, database infrastructure with respect to different database tools made of relational and non-relational. I am going to attach my resume with this letter in order for you to get an idea about my skills and work experience.
Lastly, I would be grateful for your help to provide my some extra details such as working hours and any other employ benefits while working in New Orleans. Also, Do we get a salary credit on monthly basis?
I am hoping to hear with all above information soon so that I could come as early as possible.
Warm regards,
Shwatank
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 190, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r lifestyle such as financial growth and healthy-balanced life. With these two re...
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Line 7, column 276, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... made of relational and non-relational. I am going to attach my resume with this ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, lastly, so, while, i feel, such as, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1210.0 937.175257732 129% => OK
No of words: 261.0 206.0 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63601532567 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79360532415 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609195402299 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 290.88556701 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.3707722678 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0769230769 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226577720451 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066061619199 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633654604841 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104463049137 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553711277807 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.