People now have the freedom to work and live anywhere in the world due to the development of communication technology and transportation. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
The 21st century has witnessed the significant progress in relation to communication technology and means of transport which allow people to freely reside and develop their career in foreign countries of their choice. There are no shortage of viewpoints which argue that the tendency may bring about several downsides. Nonetheless, I personally put more highlight on the upsides which certainly overweighs the possible drawbacks of the trend.
On one hand, it appears logical for saying that living and working in another country which is not motherland can be disadvantageous to some extent. A huge number of people who move to live in another country can trigger tremendous pressure on that foreign country due to the increase of crime and environmental issues which can be two leading problems for the authority. There is an alarming increase in number of foreign people who engage in burglary, robbery or even murder. Moreover, having more population also lead to the detrimental impact on the environment because of the growth in vehicle emission and unwanted waste. These issues can be obstacles for the authority of foreign land to take into careful consideration.
On the other hand, there are several of persuasive explanation to argue that the freedom to settle and work in another country can greatly benefit both individuals and the state. First, people can derive the financial stability and career promotion thanks to the opportunity of working in another country since labors’ acceptance to leave their motherland for another job means that they must be compensated with betterments and convenience for their living. High-paying jobs can bring about chances for their youngsters to pursue education in prestigious schools and have better amenities of life. Second, the foreign country can also gain benefits from the trend. In some country where there is a job shortage, foreign labors can be an ideal substitute, especially in some high demanding position. These people can greatly contribute to bring remarkable benefits to the foreign land.
In conclusion, the abovementioned analysis has outlined the merits and demerits when it comes to discuss whether people should settle down for working in another country or not. Personally, I think its drawbacks can never shadow the positives of the tendency. People can certainly have better job opportunity and higher standard of living, as well as the chance to contribute to the development of the new country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, second, so, well, i think, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2089.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 393.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3155216285 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85339885462 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526717557252 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 650.7 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3949643571 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.882352941 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1176470588 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11764705882 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131395267325 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446376955297 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0355855130071 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0911014451901 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273850243944 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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