In many countries, major cities have become too big and overcrowded. Why is it happening? Give the solution to this problem.
It is true that many major cities are expanding bigger and the residents are growing larger. There are a number of reasons behind this view and several solutions should be adopted to improve the situation.
There are two primary reasons why the metropolis increases exponentially in size and population. One reason is that people find high-paid jobs in the metropolis. It can see that downtowns are often the heart of the business and create opportunities for a career. For example, many big companies in Vietnam such as Viettel and FPT have their head offices in major cities. Furthermore, urban areas offer great transportation which is extremely convenient for citizens. For instance, to go a far distance, a ticket for buses or underground will a good choice that could save money and time. Therefore, many people rather living
Fortunately, there are several measures that can be taken to prevent this problem. The first solution would be improving the resident’s life quality. For instance, the government could open more industrial centers which can increase the number of jobs for labor workers. A second measure would be expanding the transit system. The reason is that people can get to where they want in minutes and do not need to worry about the danger of rural areas’ roads. Therefore, those solutions are effective ways to cope with the problems.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons for the expansion and the overpopulation, and steps that need to be taken to tackle this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07936507937 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76295364138 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59126984127 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.6778309963 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.3333333333 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147672683406 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481294711789 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546473560923 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974543623442 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407178344915 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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