Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Other believe that there are health benefits of living in cities. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
Recent decades have witnessed an increasing concern about lifestyle. While some people ponder that urban life can provide the available and modern health care system to the urban population. This essay agrees that an energetic lifestyle and healthy food can help rural inhabitants gain a healthy life living.
On the one hand, there is no doubt that city life can provide numerous beneficial medical to its population. One of the major benefits which is derived from urban is a superior medical care system. Indeed, the government allocates prodigious financial resources into medical infrastructure, which attracts specialized and professional medical employees and modernizes hospital facilities. For instance, when the country inhabitant has several serious and complex health conditions, such as cancer, Alzheimer's… they constantly move into metropolitan cities to be treated by high-quality medical services.
On the other hand, it is clear that villages offer many invaluable advantages that are mainly absent in the cities. The first benefit is fresh and healthy food resources. Indeed, country inhabitants can consume locally grown food or self-sufficiency food, which can put them at lower risk of medical conditions. The second benefit of regional life is the less sedentary lifestyle. In fact, with the limited range of advanced technical equipment, the rural population may have excessively done their daily activities, which can contribute to higher physical and mental health.
In conclusion, while urban life may be advantageous to provide advanced medical care, rural life can gain a healthy lifestyle via an energetic lifestyle and food resources.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67729083665 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94609055064 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617529880478 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4029913642 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.615384615 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116756688333 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470420360799 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0277268903481 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766020153679 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213870883211 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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