IELTS ESSAY - Crime is a problem all over the world. Some believe that crime prevention will make no difference, others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, Crime is increasing steadily all over the globe. Some accord that crime is preventable while others are discord it. In this essay, I will explain both the views in detail and ways to prevent crime. Everyone in the world should not like crime but situation makes them criminals.
Crime is avoidable when society and government are awareness about well being and self respect. Some measure can prevent crime for some extent. Girls and women must not go alone at night time. Children should be given full support by their parents and they are brought up with good characters like honest, di...
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Hai..
Dev..
I like your introduction and conclusion..
But still need more work..(.
Tessy
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Thanks Tessy for you valuable feedback.
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Devaraj
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