Some believe that people today have no interest in maintaining the traditional culture of their country or region. Others believe that it is still important to people that we preserve a traditional way of life.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, some believe that people have no lack of interest in perpetuating the traditional civilization of their homeland. while on the other hand others are still believing that it is still of the essence to people to hang on to the traditional culture of their country or region. this essay agrees with giving a chance to change the traditions if it effects us in a bad way, it will discuss both of the point of views in it.
Firstly, we can not deny the positive changes of people’s style of living today. For exemplification, some regions gradually get rid of the thought of the early marriage to stir freedom and justice for the both of the genders and aslo the belief of the women who cannot build their career and just stay at home and become a household for their childrens. neverless, the young generation lack fixedness for this dreadful state of affairs.
secoundly, others thinks that it is so important to maintain the thought of the traditions of their country to provide any new circumstances due to this thinking they attend to stick with their normal traditions which might effect the society in a bad way. however. they stand still and close on their culture in a mindly way to keep these strateges locked in throughout the up coming generations. also they dont give anyone the chance or the apportunity to change their mind-set which may cause a traffic out comes, so they stick to their religional traditionals like in india.
In conclusion, I believe that changing in the world cultures thoughts and rules has affected humanity’s lives. although, that the cultural traditions are they main startup point to the differentiation globaly.
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...itional civilization of their homeland. while on the other hand others are still beli...
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...nal culture of their country or region. this essay agrees with giving a chance to ch...
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... change the traditions if it effects us in a bad way, it will discuss both of the point of v...
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...nd rules has affected humanity’s lives. although, that the cultural traditions are they ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, still, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88339222615 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78665766192 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583038869258 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.6736277807 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.636363636 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7272727273 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414802522708 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14980921719 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113251101591 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234324348359 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.165744454303 0.056905535591 291% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.