Some people say that the increasing use of modern technology has made work a lot easier and quicker to accomplish. Others, however, argue that it has only made people busier.
"It is not that we use technology, we live technology" Is technology useful or not ? Although technology is very important in our life, some people see that is useless. In this topic will show that there are many positive and negative reasons about technology.
On the one hand people who are with Technology see that technology is very vital in our life. Since we start dealing with it a lot of things have changed. As an example our lives became more easier as Dealing with internet , also became more faster.
Second Positive people see that it will not stop at this stage , it will be developed by several ways to make our life more easier and faster. No one can expect when technology will stop developing.
On the other hand people who are against with using technology see that using it will waste our time. Staying a lot of time on cell phone without doing anything important. An example mother always suffer from arguing with her son who use his cell phone in the period of studying, also nowdays people suffer from not see their friends because they like staying at home and use their phones all the time. People can avoid from this issue by limit using it.
These argumens one by one can be challenged. Technology is two double edged weapon. Some can use it in good ways and some use it in bad ways. So we have to find a solution to live with the present and be ready for the future. Like first we should limit using our cell phones not to be all the day , second try to make ourselves busy as much as we can but not with technology, only with something that we like it as doing sports , going out with our friends . Third try to teach our children for using it in something benefit.
To conclude whether people are with technology or not, no one can deny that technology is very important in our life. The way we use it will determine if it is useful or not. Technology will make our life easier if we use it in good way .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...negative reasons about technology. On the one hand people who are with Tec...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...about technology. On the one hand people who are with Technology see that ...
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Line 4, column 98, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t technology is very vital in our life. Since we start dealing with it a lot of thing...
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Line 4, column 190, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...changed. As an example our lives became more easier as Dealing with internet , also became ...
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Line 4, column 202, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...an example our lives became more easier as Dealing with internet , also became mor...
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Line 4, column 226, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ame more easier as Dealing with internet , also became more faster. Second Posit...
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Line 4, column 241, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'faster' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: faster
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... see that it will not stop at this stage , it will be developed by several ways to...
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Line 5, column 120, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...eloped by several ways to make our life more easier and faster. No one can expect when tech...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... technology will stop developing. On the other hand people who are against...
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Line 8, column 224, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...e mother always suffer from arguing with her son who use his cell phone in the p...
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Line 8, column 245, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...r from arguing with her son who use his cell phone in the period of studying, al...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...rom this issue by limit using it. These argumens one by one can be challen...
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Line 11, column 79, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'weapon' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'weapons'.
Suggestion: weapons
...llenged. Technology is two double edged weapon. Some can use it in good ways and some ...
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Line 11, column 299, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ng our cell phones not to be all the day , second try to make ourselves busy as mu...
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Line 11, column 430, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...omething that we like it as doing sports , going out with our friends . Third try ...
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Line 11, column 459, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...oing sports , going out with our friends . Third try to teach our children for usi...
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Line 14, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or using it in something benefit. To conclude whether people are with tech...
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Line 14, column 239, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...our life easier if we use it in good way .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, third, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45682451253 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32528269079 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448467966574 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.8409830959 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1904761905 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0952380952 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7619047619 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191367001897 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733188974894 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533630335916 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117698356636 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368246462584 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 12.4159519038 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.46 8.58950901804 75% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...negative reasons about technology. On the one hand people who are with Tec...
^^
Line 4, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...about technology. On the one hand people who are with Technology see that ...
^^
Line 4, column 98, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t technology is very vital in our life. Since we start dealing with it a lot of thing...
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Line 4, column 190, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...changed. As an example our lives became more easier as Dealing with internet , also became ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 202, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...an example our lives became more easier as Dealing with internet , also became mor...
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Line 4, column 226, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ame more easier as Dealing with internet , also became more faster. Second Posit...
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Line 4, column 241, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'faster' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: faster
... as Dealing with internet , also became more faster. Second Positive people see that it w...
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Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... see that it will not stop at this stage , it will be developed by several ways to...
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Line 5, column 120, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...eloped by several ways to make our life more easier and faster. No one can expect when tech...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... technology will stop developing. On the other hand people who are against...
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Line 8, column 224, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e mother always suffer from arguing with her son who use his cell phone in the p...
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Line 8, column 245, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r from arguing with her son who use his cell phone in the period of studying, al...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rom this issue by limit using it. These argumens one by one can be challen...
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Line 11, column 79, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'weapon' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'weapons'.
Suggestion: weapons
...llenged. Technology is two double edged weapon. Some can use it in good ways and some ...
^^^^^^
Line 11, column 299, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ng our cell phones not to be all the day , second try to make ourselves busy as mu...
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Line 11, column 430, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...omething that we like it as doing sports , going out with our friends . Third try ...
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Line 11, column 459, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...oing sports , going out with our friends . Third try to teach our children for usi...
^^
Line 14, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or using it in something benefit. To conclude whether people are with tech...
^^
Line 14, column 239, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...our life easier if we use it in good way .
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, third, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45682451253 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32528269079 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448467966574 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.8409830959 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1904761905 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0952380952 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7619047619 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191367001897 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733188974894 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533630335916 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117698356636 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368246462584 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 12.4159519038 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.46 8.58950901804 75% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.