Governments should spend more money on medical research and less on researching the environment.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The benefit we acquire because of the medical development is the reason why people are now living longer than they used to. How much it is going to be the advantage for the society is under debate. This essay will discuss both sides of the given topic and a personal opinion will be given in the end.
Medicine has been the root of any advance in society as the health of its members highly depends on it. Its enhancement has prolonged the life of people much more than it did in the past. The positive effect of it can be improved health of leaders and professionals who serve the society flourishing. Experience has always played a great role and medicine can help experienced employees to be under a better quality of services.
However, there may be some drawbacks of it in terms of young generation as they find it difficult to get a job because of the lack of vacancy in both governmental and private sectors. It can lead to the wrong circulation of the system and cause unfavorable circumstances for the society. Consequently, it can be only harm to authority and people as well. Besides, research requires big amount of money to be spent on, which in turn, burden for the budget of any government.
Moreover, not all old people are professionals and they need more care as they get old. It costs a great deal for any family and a government to supply that care for the old both medically and financially. Therefore, medicine is the field to which more attention should be directed.
In conclusion, though it may appear to be attractive at first sight, improved medical care probably causes more drawbacks than positive impacts. But, in terms of wise planning, there may be worthy alternatives to make it useful.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69636963696 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7211816536 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544554455446 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.9881441282 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.9375 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0785087022181 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0255043917624 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333473066812 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0436153504754 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282482288955 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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