Teachers salaries should be based on their students academic performance

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Teachers' salaries should be based on their students' academic performance.

“Teacher’s salaries should be based on their student’s academic performance”; I disagree with this statement.
In my opinion, there’s a range of factors that goes into a student’s academic performance, beyond just the teachers. It’s common to see some students shine under any teacher, as much as it’s common to see some lag behind, irrespective of who teaches them. In my opinion, the overall factors that determine a student’s abilities in an academic setting are a myriad of social, economic, and academic conditions.
By social conditions, I refer to the student’s peer group. This could be influenced by the place he/she studies in. As harsh as this may sound, a peer group from MIT would be far more competitive and academically inclined than one from an inconspicuous community college. Similarly, within academic settings itself, there are a bunch of social groups, as is natural, since people tend to prefer being with others of similar interests. Each of these groups will likewise have differing motivations to do well academically.
By economic conditions, I’m referring to a group of studies that show a student’s economic background plays a major role in his/her academic successes. Schools from the less affluent sections of a city tend to be less well funded and have poorer infrastructure than schools from the wealthier parts of the same city. Students from these less affluent parts will correspondingly face challenges, like a greater exposure to crime, longer commutes to their places of study, more distractions, etc that would never be a problem to those students who are better off.
By academic conditions, I am referring to the student’s personal interest in the subject he/she is learning. Students that enjoy a particular course or subject may tend to be more motivated to learn more about said subject than those who don’t. The ability of the teacher comes into play here too, in keeping students focussed and interested in the subject at hand. The course’s inherent difficulty may come into play here too. For example, in my own anecdotal evidence, the average scores for certain courses could vary drastically. In some, scoring over 90 out of 100 was common, while in others, scoring over 60 was unheard of.
Thus, while the teacher plays an important role in determining the student’s academic success, they are not the only factor. It’s quite likely that there are several factors that are beyond what the teacher can do anything about, and thus, adjusting the teacher’s salary based on the student’s performance is a bad idea. Moreover, adding such monetary incentives might drive teachers to take up more drastic methods to improve grades, like excessive homework, more rigorous enforcement of discipline and the likes, which will just lead to excessive stress to the students and teacher alike.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 329, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'bunches'?
Suggestion: bunches
...n academic settings itself, there are a bunch of social groups, as is natural, since ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, may, moreover, similarly, so, thus, well, while, for example, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 58.6224719101 126% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2420.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 461.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24945770065 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90230181228 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 215.323595506 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555314533623 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 740.7 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.38483146067 296% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6145646439 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.238095238 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9523809524 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2380952381 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39758853589 0.243740707755 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115119940747 0.0831039109588 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151088927249 0.0758088955206 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255671737777 0.150359130593 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.218796281103 0.0667264976115 328% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 100.480337079 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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