The diagram below show how leather goods are produced.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the complete process of leather items manufacturing.
Overall it can be seen that there are ten various steps involved in the production of leather goods from raw material to the final product.
First of all, The animal skin is dried in a natural way and once the skin is dried it gets loaded into the trucks and transported to the factory for further processing. Once the delivered to the factory the raw leather is washed in a solution mixed with water and lime, After that the leather is soaked into another solution called Tannin which is made of water and vegetable matter. Then comes the Flattening process in which the wet leather is passed through rollers with pressure and ultimately makes it completely flat and smooth; and the flat lather soaked into the lime solution one more time.
Further, The smooth leather is polished with a specialized machine, The polished leather is then stacked into transport vehicles and forwarded to another manufacturing unit where the final product like footwear, handbag, ball, etc is made.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 40, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a natural way" with adverb for "natural"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... First of all, The animal skin is dried in a natural way and once the skin is dried it gets load...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, then, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0395480226 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54769060936 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581920903955 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.3215348867 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.666666667 112.824112599 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5 22.9334400587 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102071322753 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552244164718 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0309504478378 0.0843802449381 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0714197121025 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197854261471 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.2329268293 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 61.2550243902 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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