More and more people are choosing to eat healthy food and making time to exercise regularly.
Why is this?
What can we do to encourage this?
The trend towards consuming healthy products and engaging in fitness regime has grown in popularity in recent decades. This development in terms of health-consciousness could be attributed to some factors and to promote the current situation is possible when relevant steps are taken.
For one thing, significant changes in diet are adopted by people for some reasons. Chief of which is the acknowledgement of the positive impacts that a reasonable food consumption habit could bring about. The growing emphasis on nutrients to trigger productivity and thus, prolong life expectancy is in favor of housewives and the elderly. Household diets are thoroughly considered in order to provide kids a holistic development in physique, which depends upon the quality of the diet, while kindle work efficiency of adults to readily exert their optimal efficiency in the following days. In the meantime, the incorporation of regular physical exercises allows individuals to ease stress or pressure accumulated from daily challenges such as deadlines or academic expectations. The elderly, meanwhile, could relish a more rewarding life, thanks to health-oriented rituals that stem from basic understandings about healthy food and keeping fit.
For another, to perpetuate this positive change, some measures should be adopted. Firstly, the provision of public sporting facilities need to be executed to make them become widely accessible for the public. Engaging in sporting pursuits not only engender ample opportunities to cultivate physique capabilities but also gradually form a sense of self-regulation, regarding the fixed routine for exercising. Additionally, states should raise taxes on products that pose detrimental health effects once excessively consumed such as fast or processed food and finally campaigns should be enacted to instill awareness in the public.
To conclude, there are some explanations for healthy food consumption. Importantly, to maintain the current status, governmental intervention in both financial investments and interactive solutions is indeed demanding.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 701, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s individuals to ease stress or pressure accumulated from daily challenges such a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, regarding, so, still, thus, while, such as, for one thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.83006535948 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26069778234 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9128488676 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.428571429 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11582017734 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361738955579 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032347719899 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0609374627511 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0156665193413 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.53 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.03 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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