More people are shopping online today than ever before.
Why do people choose to shop this way?
Are there any disadvantages to shopping online?
These days, majority of people tend to purchase their needs via online market compared to the past lifetime. To my mind, two of the main reasons why most people buy things by using the internet are that it offers to people many options and also very convenient.
First of all, many opt for online shopping because there are so many choices on the internet. Obviously costumers can buy products depends on its quality or price, in addition they can easily compare products’ with another ones which are difficult in local market, especially for introverts. For example, if a person cannot afford one product, he or she can just leave it and choose it which is suitable for him or her. Second of all, it is convenient since they do not need to go far away from their home, hence it is cheaper. For instance, if customer wants to buy one company’s product which located another country, it is likely to cost a lot if a person buy it offline.
Although there are some drawbacks shopping online, consumers when ordering things online, they do not know the company whether it is trustworthy or not. On the network, if people want to purchase something, they have to pay the money in advance as a result consumer can get kidnapped. Moreover, it demands from people patience as they should wait their products for a long time even years. What I’m trying to say is that in covid 2019, people could not get their goods on time because borders were closed and airlines were postponed at that time.
By the way of conclusion, there are some disadvantages doing shop online such as company may not be reliable and furthermore it can be time consuming because of some global issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, second, so, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, by the way, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68474576271 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46451168965 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596610169492 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0755128679 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.166666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196760288606 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704832818109 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575092373524 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130026038739 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470028506866 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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