A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
What curriculum the nation should follow is not a trival topic. The Author asserts that A nation should require all of its students to study same national curriculum until they enter college. I partly disagree with the claim for following reasons.
I concede that following a same curriculam across the nation provides students with similiar foundation. This helps them when they select colleges outside of their states. They would not require to enroll in another couses to satisfy the requirements of outside state colleges also the peers they meet in the college would be on same level as them.
Although, Same national curriculum provide students with same foundation there are more disadvantages compared to advantages. Firstly, On what basis will the national curriculum be designed. Different states has different histories and traditions and their eduction is designed in such a way to instill those values in students, but its almost impossible to include all historical significant events in a single curriculem. For instance, Students in Maharastra are taught about Emperor Shivaji Maharaja while in Rajasthan Students are taught about Rajput Empire. They both hold significant values to states they ruled but adding both to the curriculam will just increase the burden on students.
Futhermore, different states follow different language and they prefer curriculum in their regional language. For instance, In Mumbai Marathi is taught. to students till 10th grade while in Ahmedabad its gujrathi thats prefered more. Linguistic and Cultural differences are going to impede the developement of such a curriculam.
Also the the person or comiteee appointed to design such a course will be more biased towards their language and historical events undermining other regional subjects this will further create problems between states.
In conclusion, Few subjects such as Science and Maths can have standard curriculam across the nation since they are based on similiar foundations, but specific states should be allowed to decide their subjects.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'enrolling'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: enrolling
...of their states. They would not require to enroll in another couses to satisfy the requir...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ege would be on same level as them. Although, Same national curriculum provide stude...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 124, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n their regional language. For instance, In Mumbai Marathi is taught. to students...
^^
Line 7, column 155, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...instance, In Mumbai Marathi is taught. to students till 10th grade while in Ahmed...
^^
Line 7, column 215, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...h grade while in Ahmedabad its gujrathi thats prefered more. Linguistic and Cultural ...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...the developement of such a curriculam. Also the the person or comiteee appointed to...
^^^^
Line 8, column 6, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...evelopement of such a curriculam. Also the the person or comiteee appointed to design ...
^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 6, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...evelopement of such a curriculam. Also the the person or comiteee appointed to design ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, still, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 317.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52050473186 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72436882834 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548895899054 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.1994023247 60.3974514979 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.941176471 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6470588235 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.21951772744 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282888414681 0.243740707755 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986913431741 0.0831039109588 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0966907324187 0.0758088955206 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151558631115 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121877291727 0.0667264976115 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.1639044944 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'enrolling'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: enrolling
...of their states. They would not require to enroll in another couses to satisfy the requir...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ege would be on same level as them. Although, Same national curriculum provide stude...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 124, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n their regional language. For instance, In Mumbai Marathi is taught. to students...
^^
Line 7, column 155, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...instance, In Mumbai Marathi is taught. to students till 10th grade while in Ahmed...
^^
Line 7, column 215, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...h grade while in Ahmedabad its gujrathi thats prefered more. Linguistic and Cultural ...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...the developement of such a curriculam. Also the the person or comiteee appointed to...
^^^^
Line 8, column 6, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...evelopement of such a curriculam. Also the the person or comiteee appointed to design ...
^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 6, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...evelopement of such a curriculam. Also the the person or comiteee appointed to design ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, still, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 317.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52050473186 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72436882834 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548895899054 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.1994023247 60.3974514979 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.941176471 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6470588235 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.21951772744 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282888414681 0.243740707755 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986913431741 0.0831039109588 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0966907324187 0.0758088955206 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151558631115 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121877291727 0.0667264976115 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.1639044944 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.