today the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
These days the power of advertising affects significantly the sales of popular consumer goods which might be totally irrelevant to what people exactly need. I generally agree.
Advertising is one of the instrumental tools to attract consumers and convince them to choose a specific brand for their needs. Sometimes, the power of advertising goes beyond that and makes people buy something which are not necessary. Advertising metaphorically asserts that a specific production can bring happiness or self-satisfaction and tempts people to buy that without thinking about how it can be utilized in their daily lives. In other words, advertising uses people’s dreams to trick them and put them under illusion that they would reach their dreams by buying these staff. For instance, Samsung’s productions almost have all the features as the same quality as Apple Company’s but Apple is known as the best and the most luxurious brand in mobile and laptop. Because of this, some people buy Apple’s production not only for the features they need but also for showing off among their peers.
Poverty is another factor which makes people think about how they have to spend their limited money. Poor people always must consider what they exactly need because they would forfeit from some goods by buying others. There are lots of people who stare at shopping malls who will not enter them. Therefore, although advertising is tempting, destitute has somewhat more powerful than adverting and negates its effects.
In conclusion, in large scales advertising has significant impact on high sales of commodities but in each person scale, there are lots of uncertainty about whether advertising is successful or not. Economic condition is one of the important factor which can exacerbate or negate the effect of advertising.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28275862069 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77496023046 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596551724138 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5194911675 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.428571429 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21428571429 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201988905565 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709524787628 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742850936064 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151051940068 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737776520275 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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