Young people should be encouraged to pursue long term realistic goals rather than seek immediate fame and recognition

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...lp internet, social meadia like facebook , instagram , you tube,tik-tok etc. App...
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... social meadia like facebook , instagram , you tube,tik-tok etc. Apparently, peo...
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...ocial meadia like facebook , instagram , you tube,tik-tok etc. Apparently, people...
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Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...a like facebook , instagram , you tube,tik-tok etc. Apparently, people become enternet...
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Line 1, column 319, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , longing
... most people get tempt to be one of them,longing for immediate fame and recognization,t...
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Line 1, column 350, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...e of them,longing for immediate fame and recognization,there are meager number of...
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...ng for immediate fame and recognization,there are meager number of people, who suceed...
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... meager number of people, who suceeded. indeed, success defination get morph to some p...
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...to some people, people get so mesmerized to prompt and fleeting success, so that ...
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Suggestion: , everybody
...AS NOT BUILT IN A DAY'. Nonetheless,everybody should remember that every thing is bui...
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Suggestion: , just
... every thing is build in pain and slowly,just as tom curise-HOLLYWOOD superstar as ma...
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Line 1, column 733, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , director
...YWOOD superstar as many eminentn writter,director,actress,actros achivieve their sucess a...
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Suggestion: , actros
...s many eminentn writter,director,actress,actros achivieve their sucess anything but ove...
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Suggestion: Even
...ve their sucess anything but over night.Even thoug immediate fame and popularity is ...
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Suggestion: , young
...e and popularity is tempting fascinating,young people should comply long-term and real...
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Line 1, column 930, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...comply long-term and realistic objective which is not fleeting,percive as serendi...
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Line 1, column 954, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , percive
...listic objective which is not fleeting,percive as serendipity. However, there are...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s not fleeting,percive as serendipity. However, there are meager people who get...
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Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , for
...le who get immediate fame and popularity,for instanc- world final cup match 2014 was...
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Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...rgentina, only winner goal was scored by german mid-fielder-mario gortezk to lift...
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Suggestion: , on
...-fielder-mario gortezk to lift the tropy,on that particular day,he also elicipse th...
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Line 4, column 74, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , he
...to lift the tropy,on that particular day,he also elicipse the the stardom of gobal ...
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Line 4, column 92, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
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Suggestion: the
...on that particular day,he also elicipse the the stardom of gobal icon superstar leo mes...
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Line 4, column 92, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...on that particular day,he also elicipse the the stardom of gobal icon superstar leo mes...
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Line 4, column 141, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , who
...tardom of gobal icon superstar leo messi,who play for argentina and barcelona fc, be...
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Line 4, column 195, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , before
...argentina and barcelona fc, before match,before match world scarcely was cognizant of ...
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...before match,before match world scarcely was cognizant of mild-fielder.so as shor...
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....so as short viedo of particular peolple become dessiminatio over the the interne...
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...cular peolple become dessiminatio over the the internet at immediately everybpdy known...
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Suggestion: the; the
...cular peolple become dessiminatio over the the internet at immediately everybpdy known...
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Line 4, column 399, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , elephant
...pdy known the particular person.moreover,elephant in room is TIK-TOK viedo,some people be...
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Line 4, column 433, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , some
...reover,elephant in room is TIK-TOK viedo,some people become instant celebrity when th...
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Line 4, column 549, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'allures'?
Suggestion: allures
...d in the platform.one the other hand it allure many young people for same objective...
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Line 4, column 560, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...atform.one the other hand it allure many young people for same objective, fact is...
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Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: IN_WHO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: whom
... not only popular but also sucessful as who follow long term and realistic goal,tha...
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Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , that
... who follow long term and realistic goal,that is nobody remember dare to remember the...
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Suggestion: Lionel
...ielder, mario gortez, after that match. lionel messi is stil gobal superstar of footba...
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Line 5, column 291, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , some
...s stil gobal superstar of football world,some consider him as greatest of all time,sc...
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Suggestion: , scince
...ome consider him as greatest of all time,scince the focus to perform in every maatc...
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...greatest of all time,scince the focus to perform in every maatch and yearing t...
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...me,scince the focus to perform in every maatch and yearing to improve and evole ...
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Suggestion: , effort
... to improve and evole applying ones mind,effort and energy. ...
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...e applying ones mind,effort and energy. Therefore, sports is most quintessential...
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Suggestion: , galvainze
...s is most quintessential to young people,galvainze onself for enduring and persuing for on...
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Line 8, column 130, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...d persuing for on term long and realstic objetive rather than forwith fame and po...
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...an forwith fame and popularity whicch is not meretricious,let alone fleeting and...
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...with fame and popularity whicch is not meretricious,let alone fleeting and rama...
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...popularity whicch is not meretricious,let alone fleeting and ramatince.In particu...
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Suggestion: In
...icious,let alone fleeting and ramatince.In particular young people should focus to...
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...ce, technology, arts and literature etc,which eventually engeder fame and poularity. ...
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... eventually engeder fame and poularity. since picasso and matasie didnt produce their...
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Suggestion: didn't
...nd poularity. since picasso and matasie didnt produce their best painting in over nig...
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Suggestion: , and
...roduce their best painting in over night,and leonel messi didnt messi isnt one night...
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...painting in over night,and leonel messi didnt messi isnt one night wonder.
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...over night,and leonel messi didnt messi isnt one night wonder.
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... leonel messi didnt messi isnt one night wonder.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, second, so, therefore, as to, in particular

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2350.0 1615.20841683 145% => OK
No of words: 402.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.84577114428 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.57456938931 2.80592935109 127% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 176.041082164 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624378109453 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 726.3 506.74238477 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.2975951904 246% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 263.484700694 49.4020404114 533% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 293.75 106.682146367 275% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.25 20.7667163134 242% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.75 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 56.0 5.01903807615 1116% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246821254176 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948718765001 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952049633267 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100999521546 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710351946976 0.056905535591 125% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.2 13.0946893788 238% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 3.81 50.2224549098 8% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.2 11.3001002004 223% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.54 12.4159519038 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.42 8.58950901804 133% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 78.4519038076 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.1190380762 217% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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