The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?
Growing online shopping, certainly, is in demand, nowadays. However, it will shut all shops in towns and cities at some point in time is conservative to say. In my opinion, despite its increasing popularity, a few shops will still survive to meet the needs of digitally illiterate people.
On the one hand, online shopping not only provides great flexibility to shop at any time, but it also saves a huge amount of money. One can utilise his spare time, and do shopping sitting in a comfort zone of home atmosphere. For example, house makers, especially with young kids, who does not find time to go out because of their newborn special care; for such a group of people, online shopping does wonder. It saves time as well as the cost at the ease of their fingertips.
On the other hand, saying that it will be responsible for shutting all the physical outlets in near future is not a right statement to make because the traditional shops are the only way of shopping for digitally illiterate people, who do not know to shop online on mobiles or computers. In addition to this, many people do not prefer online shopping because it does not provide a chance for the users to feel and touch the materials. Sometimes, it looks good on websites, but in actuality, it's not always the same as expected or shown in the pictures online. In such cases, physical shops provide a great variety of choices; one can choose the right fit, look, colour, and material in a short period. For instance, once I bought twenty items online, out of those, I returned fifteen items because of their size in material issues, and later I regretted my decision of preferring online shopping over conventional shopping.
To conclude, there is no doubt that online shopping has gained much more attention in the past few years. Although it saves a tremendous amount of money and gives a flexible shopping time, in my view, it could not replace the original concept of traditional shopping in long run because of the low digital literacy rate in certain groups of people to run an online shopping site and no physical feel of materials and textures.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 492, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...oks good on websites, but in actuality, its not always the same as expected or show...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, still, well, for example, for instance, in addition, no doubt, as well as, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1758.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73854447439 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56188932832 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539083557951 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.0011224406 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.571428571 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9285714286 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31112759918 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114799655523 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07333757992 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203091596393 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284199624077 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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