Benefits of traveling
It would be remiss if you think that the benefits of traveling are just to rest and check-in virtual life because the travel journey brings a lot of wonderful things that few people expect. Relaxing your mind is the most obvious benefit of traveling. A journey to a faraway place, in harmony with nature, forest and sea will help you temporarily forget your fatigue and depression. Traveling will help you to relax. you will have the opportunity to meet and make new friends who share the same interests and passion for travelling. You may love and be proud of the beautiful landscapes, long historical sites or have can be touched by the difficulties and hardships of living of the local people, about the children who are still in need. You will get to see the beautiful landscapes, listen to the local voices, better understand the lifestyle and geographical location of each region. These hands-on experiences are the benefits of traveling that you wouldn't be able to get from just staying at home. Because to make a trip, you will learn and prepare a lot of things yourself, from arranging time and costs to booking, booking a car, making a detailed schedule,... the feeling of being prepared in advance. Each trip is also quite an interesting and exciting experience. Therefore, do not waste your time and money to reward yourself with vacation trips and explore new lands.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
... are the benefits of traveling that you wouldnt be able to get from just staying at hom...
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Line 1, column 1164, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...ooking a car, making a detailed schedule,... the feeling of being prepared in adva...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, still, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1144.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 236.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84745762712 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65734389705 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 106.607317073 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60593220339 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 283.868780488 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.3323108288 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3333333333 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91666666667 5.23603664747 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194560128983 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791757486967 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11787858783 0.0843802449381 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194560128983 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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