in order to study at university, students are required to pay expensive tuition fees. not all students can afford them, so some people think that university education should be free for everyone.
to what extent do you agree or disagree?
University tuition is the main reason of drop out of numerous students as it is undoubtedly high-priced, so a great number of graduated high schoolers do not have this opportunity to accomplish university registration. I assume that education should be free to encourage students to carry on with their studies.
First, there are many people who have potentials to do something or have rich intelligence in some fields. They will be beneficial for their countries yet, they are not capable of paying huge university’s fees. Therefore, they study upto university and then they leave their studies. So, country loses its talented people who can be useful for their society development but due to expensive higher education, pupils leave their studies to reduce the cost of living and they would rather to find a simple job which does not need any professional skills.
Second, some students with great curriculum vitae prefer to follow their studies in another country without paying the tuition. therefore, many countries offer free educations and special training to international students and also give them job offers with high salaries. For instance, Germany offer free engineering education to international pupils and after completing education offers a job as well. So, a country loses their talented people. As a result of this, foreign countries will accept them alternatively.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the free of charge on higher education certainly provides motivation to students to continue their studies.
- The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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- The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- in order to study at university students are required to pay expensive tuition fees not all students can afford them so some people think that university education should be free for everyone to what extent do you agree or disagree 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...her country without paying the tuition. therefore, many countries offer free educations a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, second, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39419087137 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92477850422 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589211618257 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8798338259 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.333333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0833333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280143060007 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102246937003 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450929493686 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167082467169 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051696863277 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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