The table below shows information about age, average income per person and population below the poverty line in three states in the USA.
The given table illustrates the proportion of people under 18, over 60, together with the average income and population below poverty in California, Utah, and Florida. In general, while the number of people under 18 years old in Utah is the highest, Florida has the most senior citizens. Also, the average income per person and the percentage of poor people both take first place in California.
Regarding the age of the population, Utah had the largest proportion of people under 18 with 28%. Following that is California, which is 1% more than Florida (16%). In contrast, the number of elderly people occupies 23% in Florida, which is nearly fourth times more than Utah, at 8%. Also, California records relatively 13% of people aged over 60.
In terms of the income per capita, people in California earn $23,000 on average, which is also the highest, followed by Florida and Utah, resulting in $22,000 and $17,000 respectively. Interestingly, although California has the highest average income, it also experiences the highest percentage of people below the poverty line, at 16% as opposed to that in Utah, which is only 9%. Lastly, the figure for Florida stands at 12%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, lastly, regarding, so, while, in contrast, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 972.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98461538462 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6319035891 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548717948718 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.8549895098 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149979792793 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646936322446 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771836690167 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112861549736 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679941887498 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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