Some young people look forward to a year of traveling, a gap year, before they begin work or university and see it as a chance to broaden their horizons. For others this is an expensive waste of time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Many people believe that graduated youngsters should not waste a gap year for traveling because of its disadvantages. However, I would argue that does positively affect peoples life than make it worse.
On the one hand, spend a gap year relaxing may bring troubles to students. Firstly, they will have a slower start compared to others at the same age. When people are resting and relaxing after a hard-working school year, at the same time, their friends are applying for a low position in companies and work flat out to earn money and gradually get promotion. Consequently, some will get stressed and confused when being compared to others successful friends. That will badly affect their occupation as well as their mental. Secondly, a gap year has been considered as a waste of time and money. It’s importance has been seriously overlooked as people cannot accept a lazy teenagers, who instead of working hard to send devotion to their parents, choose to relax in a productive age.
On the other hand, spend a year off to traveling around may make the youngsters become more independent. To begin with, a little amount of money earned in the first year may not as valuable as practical experiences, which can help you earn twice as much in the future. Graduated students is almost lack of practical experiences also they are well educated and qualified. That’s the reason why they do not get high position in international companies. Their enthusiasm combines with experiences and their intelligent will make them become a perfect person that big cooperations are looking for. Furthermore, this is an appropriate period to relax and carefully think about future plan by this way people will happy with future life and their occupation without regrets about your choice. They are enthusiasm combines with experiences and their intelligent will make them become a perfect person that big cooperations are looking for furthermore is an appropriate. To relax and carefully think about future plan. By this way, people will happy with future life and their occupation without regrets about their choice.
In conclusion, I agree that while taking a gap year may slow the development of young people but it will have long-term advantages for their future life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 673, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'teenager'?
Suggestion: teenager
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Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...erations are looking for furthermore is an appropriate. To relax and carefully think about fut...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1898.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08847184987 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74853979969 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517426273458 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8274252274 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8947368421 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6315789474 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.36842105263 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271741226886 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857524022637 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525735052162 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170462422381 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218151974588 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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