In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining. Why do you think it is happening? How to solve this issue?
Millions of flora and fauna have declined in the present-day world due to numerous human activities and climate change. In this essay, apart from mentioning two possible reasons, some solutions will be presented to deal with this destructive tendency.
Firstly, due to higher demand for wood and food supply, deforestation has become more frequent to supply that appetite desire, bringing many species to the verge of extinction. Additionally, the need to expand residential areas also leads to the damage of animals' habitats, worsening their living conditions. Moreover, human activities like emitting carbon dioxide from factories and vehicles or over-consuming disposable products have accelerated the rise of Earth's temperature and the formation of carbon footprints. This directly has many harmful effects on the environment and the habitat of numerous species, which eventually lead to a decline in their numbers.
To solve this, the government and responsible authorities should regulate the exploitation of wood and expose a higher penalty on illegal wild animal trading. Plus, the countries should undertake efforts to curb carbon emissions by actively propagating about protecting the environment on various communication media like newspapers or TV broadcasts, encouraging their citizens to plant more trees, and using environmentally friendly products. Also, many environmental laws can be passed to prevent contaminating activities that seriously damage the habitats. Furthermore, individuals should involve more in protecting the environment by sorting their rubbish, recycling their plastics packaging and using public transport. As a result, humans can save the Earth or, in other words, protect the home of various kinds of animals and plants.
In conclusion, to preserve natural diversity, human beings have to be more aware of their daily activities and make an attempt to lead eco-friendly life. This will take time, so the governments and their residents ought to be patient and consistent with reaching a Greener Earth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, apart from, in conclusion, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1744.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71803278689 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06101001576 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632786885246 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3004434583 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.153846154 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116008649349 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0418087921604 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344996836285 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.066080660466 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0277756204913 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.68 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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