The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram demonstrates thoroughly about how bricks for construction sites are produced. Generally, there are a variety of stages, from collecting materials for bricks to distributing them to consumers.
First of all, the digger has an assignment of taking clay from the ground. The second stage is sifting through a metal grid to keep pure clay, that will be moved directly to the next step by a roller then. Thirdly, treated clay will be mixed with sand and water well, then workers mold them into a standard shape or cut with wire, and we have . After that, shaped clay will be arranged together in an oven to be desiccated in 24 to 48 hours. In the subsequent step, all of the dried clay is delivered to a specialized kiln, moderated from 200 degree C to 980 degree C before increasing the temperature to around 870 degree C and 1300 degree C, until the red-hot bricks meet the quality, they will be let in a cooling chamber in 48-72 hours. At the following stage, the workers arrange them into huge cubes and package. Finally, transforming new labeled bricks to market with trucks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 342, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...dard shape or cut with wire, and we have . After that, shaped clay will be arrange...
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Line 2, column 466, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...24 to 48 hours. In the subsequent step, all of the dried clay is delivered to a specialize...
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Line 2, column 883, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...w labeled bricks to market with trucks.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, then, third, thirdly, well, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70680628272 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60507796555 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659685863874 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.4187210693 43.030603864 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8888888889 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 5.23603664747 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0539116506926 0.215688989381 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0288403152569 0.103423049105 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418784420977 0.0843802449381 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0747364598663 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586485920612 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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