The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attractions in Britain in the year 1999.
The pie chart compares the number of British people who visited distinct places of interest in 1999, in conjunction with the exact proportion of visitors to theme parks in the same year.
Overall, what stands out is that the majority of visitors constitute theme parks and museums and galleries, for three quarters to be exact, while only a small minority is made up of historic houses and monuments and wildlife parks and zoos.
Regarding the distribution of the two highest visited places, people from Britain went to theme parks marginally more than museums and galleries, 38% and 37 % respectively. In the theme parks category itself, the Blackpool Pleasure Beach had visitors nowhere near as high as the other theme parks a whole, which consists of just below half of it. The rest is made up of Alton Towers for 17%, Pleasurland for 16%, Chessington World of Adventure for 9%, and Legoland for just one-third.
Turning to the other two visited recreation centers, wildlife parks and zoos were the least popular tourist attractions with the figure just below one-third of the whole. Similarly, historic houses and momuments’ popularity were not as high as the aforementioned types in the previous paragraph, with the amount of 16%, but it still attracted more sightseers than wildlife parks and zoos.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, similarly, still, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1096.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0976744186 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69576459959 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576744186047 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 31.6756521444 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.571428571 112.824112599 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7142857143 22.9334400587 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148919538285 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737264161164 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700802756415 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0967698418781 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760917006926 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.2329268293 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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