Some people say that in the modern world it is very difficult for people to have a healthy lifestyle. Others, however, say that it is easy for people to be healthy and fit if they want to be.
Discuss both view and give your opinion
In cutting-edge society these days, people find it intimidating to follow a healthy lifestyle. Meanwhile, others have a reverse point that they can be fit and healthy without difficulty. From my perspective, the latter opinion is agreed more.
There is no doubt that many reasons cause the problems of establishing the unhealthy way. Firstly, going with the current of developing world, junk food and instant products have a significant increase which may pose a threat in human diseases such as heart attack, obesity, high blood pressure and so on. For instance, fried chicken restaurants like MC Donal, KFC which appeal to chicken-holic have grown excessively. As a result, their bodies are replenished with enough indispensable nutrients and a number of patients diagnosed with obesity are recorded at high figures as well. In addition, in conjunction with fast food, individual means have also flourished that can diminish air quality. In fact, the incidence of pneumonia increases over time given air pollution.
On the other hand, there are numerous ways to lead a healthy life in such a modern era. Being manufactured and used widely, technologies insist citizens on doing exercise flexibly whenever they want. For example, people choose to practice by sport equipment, specifically by treadmill at home instead of running outside where many vehicles release emissions. Even if going out has to be done, mask will be utilised optimal to reduce an adverse impact of dust. Regarding a good diet, that people can build their own eat clean menu such as cutting down on fried food and consuming more vegetables in order to avoid fat and salt depends on human consciousness. I state that difficulties can be lessened and dealt with.
In conclusion, the modern world brings either advantageous effect or harmfulness to a healthy lifestyle. However, I strongly believe that beneficial impact outweigh as long as people perceive responsibility to life and risks surrounding.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, regarding, so, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, no doubt, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28253968254 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93402726623 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688888888889 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7289544042 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8823529412 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5294117647 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0588235294 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249289212136 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677397027 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547538891922 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153270269185 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749685798066 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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