Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In 20 years there will be less pollution in the air than there is today
Keeping the environment clean is the ultimate goal for people in order to have a healthy life. While some people believe that in the future, the amount of pollution will increase, I beg to differ. I think that pollution will drastically decrease in the near future. I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
Many people propose that people do not take into consideration the severe effect of pollution on the universe. Depending on the fact that automobiles and other transportation tools are increasing in number. In my opinion, this is not utterly true, there is a side of the story that is hidden or incomplete in their perspective. For example, most car companies shifted the energy source from the old fossils and gasses to electrical energy. For instance, Tesla is now one of the major brands in the vehicle market. It only uses electrical power as the source of energy for cars engine. They are wise to produce an environment-friendly car with outstanding features. Not only this, but the price is affordable for most of the middle-class population. So, Tesla is now is the best seller car around the world.
Moreover, the government has a significant role in decreasing pollution by applying serious rules towards the manufacturers who produce a tremendous amount of pollution. As a result, Many companies like Coca-Cola, started to use solar energy to alternative the old conventional petroleum. But, there is no media coverage to advertise this new shift towards these new alternatives. Therefore, the majority of people do not know or acknowledge this huge change.
In addition, the government started to award people who help the community by giving them tax returns to encourage them to be more responsible toward their community.
In conclusion, I Firmly believe that pollution will abruptly decrease in the near future. Because people are now more aware of public health and government are executing excellent efforts to improve the overall environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 329.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14589665653 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00095604725 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574468085106 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5653513424 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.65 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.45 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0957440502419 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0291320279151 0.076458572812 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369525380882 0.0737576698707 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0538785564722 0.150856017488 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325205308148 0.0645574589148 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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