Living in a foreign country where you don’t speak their language well can cause lots of serious social problems and practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
There is an upward trend towards people emigrating from their countries to other foreign nations who do not have the ability to speak the language fluently. It is believed that this can lead to numerous serious social problems and practical issues. For me, troubles, ranging from socially to realistically, could possibly be the consequences; however, their degree is not on a large scale as stated.
First and foremost, when moving to another nation without understanding their language, people cannot get on well with their neighbors due to less interaction and communication. For this reason, it is likely that if something bad happens, help and support cannot be offered on time because you and your neighbors are complete strangers. Additionally, you will be more inclined to be mistakenly regarded as unfriendly, rude, or uninteresting. Therefore, you will have fewer or even no friends than anybody else.
What is more, practical troubles can confront you at any time when you do not have an understanding of the foreign language being spoken. To be more precise, in some cases, when you suddenly encounter several incidents in your life, it is more challenging for you to find any assistance in your surroundings. To illustrate, you are in your car commuting to work, and unexpectedly, it gets broken down on the road. If this is the case, you will be unable to assist passers-by because your language comprehension is at a nil level.
To sum up, emigrants who cannot speak the language of the foreign nation to which they are moving can easily face various troubles, ranging from social aspects to realistic circumstances.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 308, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'could'.
Suggestion: could
...ranging from socially to realistically, could possibly be the consequences; however, their deg...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, therefore, well, in some cases, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10074626866 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96959371914 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582089552239 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0996883643 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.916666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27630441725 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101041809971 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643490497705 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156556445707 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489598843585 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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