the diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufacruted.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The process describes the way in which instant noodles are made.
Overall, this process consists of 2 main stages beginning with a flour truck being delivered to storage silos and then ending up with labelling and sealing stages. It is necessary that product cross through each stage otherwise the whole process could be destroyed if a single step is skipped.
In the beginning of the main stage of the process, a flour is put into storage silos. Then, water, and oil are mixed with flour by a special mixer. These mixture are rolled to form dough sheets by rollers. Subsequently, the sheets are stripped to dough strips after which they are casted to noodles discs.
In the second stage, these products are cooked in hot oil and then they are dried. Following this, dried noodles are added in cups with vegetables and spices. Finally, the noodles cups are labelled and sealed by labels, which completes the instant noodle manufacturing process.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 149, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this mixture' or 'These mixtures'?
Suggestion: This mixture; These mixtures
...re mixed with flour by a special mixer. These mixture are rolled to form dough sheets by roll...
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Line 5, column 281, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ped to dough strips after which they are casted to noodles discs. In the secon...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, second, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 799.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99375 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38641172841 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6125 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4629019036 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.9 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0804447418518 0.215688989381 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361903360699 0.103423049105 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395277287833 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0619558548059 0.15604864568 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034251397156 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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