Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements and this sets a bad example to young people To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

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Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many argue that celebrities such as film stars, sports personalities and musicians are usually well known for their glamorous and luxurious lifestyles rather than for their personal accomplishments and taking them as example can be dangerous to young people. While I agree that celebrities have negative influences on young people, I also believe that they can be good role models.

To start with, teenagers are the most common type of people influenced by celebrities. They idolize and emulate their favorite television or movie stars. Unfortunately, many of these celebrities set erroneous standa...

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