In some countries, schools are open till late so that children can be looked after when parents are at work. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.
In certain areas, institutions work till late every since, the parents don’t get chances at their works station as their children are safe in their closets. This essay will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages relating to my viewpoint.
On the one hand, it’s always better for the mother and father to concentrate on the job without any hindrance with respect to their children pick up time from the school. There are day care available in most of the institutions after their school period so that the kid can spend their leisure period with the toys in the play area. For example, in India in institution named ”KLAY” has the class timmy from morning 7 am to 2 pm. And, after 2 pm, the staff take care of them until their parents the venue to escout them to their respective house
On the other, there are certain drawbuch for children if they don’t meet their guardians at the night time. For instance, according to a survey on Japan, the guardians work late after reaching home and they don’t share their happiness with their kid which result an unhealthy relationship among them. However, there are multiple drawbacks as the pupils don’t receive proper guidance from their parents as they are busy with their works.
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- In some countries schools are open till late so that children can be looked after when parents are at work Discuss the advantages and disadvantages 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, for example, for instance, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1039.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8779342723 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4107695506 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610328638498 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 506.74238477 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.5256748943 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.875 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.625 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173376649073 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802880255906 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526610279377 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1364375675 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671050027005 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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