The table shows the information about the underground railway systems in six cities which are : London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto, Los Angles.
The table shows the information about the underground railway systems in six cities which are : London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto, Los Angles.
With six road systems that are the six major cities of the world, let's take a look at the opening dates, kilometers of routes and annual traffic of the cities.
From the table, we can see that the first underground railway system opened was London (18630, the last was Los Angles (2001), ranked second is Paris, although it opened 37 years after London, but The number of visitors coming each year is much more than London's 775 million visitors, Paris 1191 million visitors, Tokyo (1927), Washington DC (1976), Kyoto (1981) respectively.
The year the system was founded is directly proportional to its length, which also means that London has the longest system (394km) and Los Angles only 28km, the number of visitors per year is also the lowest of the six cities with 50 million people Leading the way in arrivals each year is Tokyo with 1927 million people.
Summarizing the six underground rail systems, which has its own preeminence, London is the city with the oldest underground railway system in the world and the longest of the six.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2022-04-29 | vothithaonghi | 73 | view |
- Mission QUESTION FOR GIRLS Young people should spend more time in cultural activities such as music and theatre and less time in sports To what extent do you agree with this statement 56
- HOMEWORK write on paper and submit next week in class 11
- The bar chart below shows the number of students who chose certain university subjects in 2005 41
- The pie chart below shows some of the UK s favorite dishes
- The table shows the information about the underground railway systems in six cities which are London Paris Tokyo Washington DC Kyoto Los Angles 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, look, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 990.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90099009901 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3596110534 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574257425743 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 22.4926829268 178% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.1296843443 43.030603864 209% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 198.0 112.824112599 175% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.4 22.9334400587 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 5.23603664747 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.517901715427 0.215688989381 240% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.325978348595 0.103423049105 315% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.245486821966 0.0843802449381 291% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.325978348595 0.15604864568 209% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.245486821966 0.0819641961636 300% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.8 13.2329268293 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.26 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.03 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.9970731707 164% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.