The key solution for the environmental issues is for the current generation to live a less comfortable life to benefit future generations. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Over the past years, environmental hazards have been rapidly increasing to impact the mankind detrimentally. However, there is a workaround to encountered such negative effect which is to sacrifice a luxurious lifestyle of current individuals for the betterment of the upcoming generations. And, I firmly concur with this kind of notion.
There are a multiple number of reasons to justify that the individuals should live a less comfort life to resolve the ongoing problem of environmental issues. First and foremost, people should use paper and cloth bags more instead of using plastic bags as they are storing and occupying more green spaces on our mother earth which will have negative effects for future generation. Secondly, the government should limit the process of deforestation and policing paper use by recycling and reusing the paper. This step will evidently help to save greenery which in turn would be a upside for a healthy environment for future humankind.
Furthermore, it is advisable for current generation to reduce the amount of energy, especially when it comes to using electricity. People should turn off unnecessary lights in their homes, which will help to save the water which is used in producing electricity. Apparently, it will help to save one of the most significant natural resources on our Earth for the upcoming descendants. Lastly, nowadays, everyone should travel by public transport in cities because increasing the number of automobiles on roads emits the greenhouse gases. And, for the cleaner and healthier environment, the usage of public transport should be given as a prior importance in order to reduce the negative effect of greenhouse gases.
To conclude, all the above facts mentioned are a key solution to encounter the effect of environmental problems, and I strongly believe that such measures will make a healthy and clean environment for the current ones as well as for future generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 578, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...to save greenery which in turn would be a upside for a healthy environment for fu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, furthermore, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, well, as for, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29032258065 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95469784141 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545161290323 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7925875522 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.153846154 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215731732722 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726837275151 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066823561625 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13334295671 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475628121222 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.