International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment.
Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
International tourism has brought enormous profit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Personally, I felt that the advantages of international tourism outweigh the disadvantages.
It is irrefutable that there are some problems associated with this industry. Firstly, developing of tourism influence not only living cost but also housing might increase significantly. As a result, it will put pressure on local resources. Secondly, tourism creates pollution and waste, it will disturb on local health. Another problem is the n...
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influence not only living cost but also housing might increase significantly.
influence not only living cost but also housing which might increase significantly.
It means that they maybe also to save money and improving their standard of living,
It means that they maybe also save money and improve their standard of living,
that a tourism place who has a good planning
that a tourism place where it has a good planning
not only giving lucks... but also maintenance and raising of environment will be better.
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