You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Natural resources are always priceless and valuable for human development. However, the environmental situation is getting worse due to human activities. Therefore, the only factor that can fix this problem is the people, but which scale do we need to conduct this project? I strongly believe that each person has a role in protecting and conserving the environment.
Most governments in the world are more concerned about the economic benefits further than environmental issues although they all have signed an agreement to cut off emissions. That’s the reason why individuals have to take action to influence the whole society. Take Niger as an example, decades of drought, land-clearing, and demand for firewood had left Niger nearly treeless. Efforts of the government to reforest had failed until the local people find a way to re-establish woodlands with a little outside help, and almost no money. The trees weren’t planted but they sprout from the mold roots. Now, fresh trees are popping up in the village after the village. As a result, soils are more fertile and moister, and crop yields are up.
However, individual encouragement and attempts are not enough because the changes just happen on a small scale. If we want to have a larger effect, we will need a global collaboration that comes from governments. Take Niger as an example again, after this country’s success in restoring a majority of their forest, neighboring countries already are racing to follow Niger’s example. They ask for assistance and support from experienced Nigerian farmers. The approach is expanding into East Africa, Tanzania, Kenya, and Ethiopia, and it is attracting interest outside Africa as well.
In conclusion, the efforts to restore the natural environment require actions from both individuals and governments, of those the personal responsibility is the point. I highly recommend the government should provoke and encourage more campaigns with their power and influence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35576923077 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92151435687 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657051282051 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9110124422 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61111111111 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101755320503 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0261926366967 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359860801741 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0611999647975 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282998021505 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.