You are a student at university in Canada You have recently lost your university ID card Write a letter to police station giving details for who You Are what happened and asked to record your details so that you can apply for a new ID card

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You are a student at university in Canada. You have recently lost your university ID card. Write a letter to police station, giving details for who You Are, what happened and asked to record your details so that you can apply for a new ID card

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 40, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'returning'.
Suggestion: returning
... Having said that, just yesterday while returning back from college for that I had to take bus...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...I had to take bus in haste because there was a great rush at bus transit. I suppo...
^^
Line 8, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d to hearing from you. Yours faithfully Sakshi
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, incidentally, look, moreover, so, while, i suppose

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63212435233 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51604425052 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658031088083 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5410727812 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293639912426 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114823391808 0.0766984524023 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0965575717618 0.0603063233224 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163819887497 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116741140232 0.0580467560999 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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