In some countries, The proportion of older people will become higher than that of younger people. Is this positive or negative development
In many parts of the world, It is true that the number of older generations will become larger than that of younger generations. While there might be some benefits, I would argue that this trend has far more drawbacks.
On the one hand, this tendency seems beneficial simply because the increasing number of older people could preserve cultural and historical values. For example, elderly people usually keep tradition and customs while young people often adopt a new lifestyle of western societies. As a result, they are likely to ensure identity of their country, which may boost tourism development in the long term.
In spite of the arguments above, I believe that downsides are more significant for the following reasons. Firstly, the higher number of the older generation might cause labor shortage. For instance, many developed countries that tend to have the high proportion of old population are faced with insufficient young labor. Hence, these countries can import foreign workers from poorer countries, and this are likely to create social problems in the long term. Another reason is that the growing number of elderly people could put extreme pressure on healthcare system. To illustrate, elderly people often suffer from more disease, such as heart problems, diabetes, and depression. Thus, they need more medical services, leading the government to build more nursing centers and hire more nurses to look after older people.
In conclusion, although I recognize the possible positive the discussed trend, it seems to me that it is a negative development overall
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, look, may, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in spite of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27380952381 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59979394788 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638888888889 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.99171426 49.4020404114 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 102.230769231 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9230769231 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321162729337 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0866393554032 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514615152403 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165161677232 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324021550595 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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