You took your family to a nearby restaurant. you were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager.
write a letter to the manager of the restaurant.
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Arif I am as a costumer on you restaurant on Soekarno avenue. I am writing this letter to express my disappointment with the meal that I and my family had at your restaurant last Monday. I am hoping that you would to take action to improve your food quality and service.
In every weekend I often took my family to dinner outside, Although there are many other restaurans very close to my home, we had heard of some excellent menu about yours, so we decide to go there. We ordered five bowl of meatball and ice tea, but we were shocked to discover when we eat the meatball the taste is too salty, and also take a long time to serve the meal. we had complain this case to the chef and they said they forgot to put salt twice and so many queue costumer especialy in weekend.
Assuming that your restaurant has a very good reputation, you would take action about this case and remaind your chef to more careful and faster to serve costumer.
Thank you for giving the matter your attention.
Yours Faitfully
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 215, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'bowl' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'bowls'.
Suggestion: bowls
... we decide to go there. We ordered five bowl of meatball and ice tea, but we were sh...
^^^^
Line 6, column 371, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...lso take a long time to serve the meal. we had complain this case to the chef and ...
^^
Line 6, column 378, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'complained'.
Suggestion: complained
...e a long time to serve the meal. we had complain this case to the chef and they said the...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 378, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'complained'.
Suggestion: complained
...e a long time to serve the meal. we had complain this case to the chef and they said the...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 859.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45077720207 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32480297041 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616580310881 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.3181000662 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.375 76.5299724578 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 16.8248392259 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25207677186 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109169624926 0.0766984524023 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732205529924 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157734979888 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0868979224435 0.0580467560999 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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