old friend and new friend, which one is more important.
Friendship is an adorable bond one can share and I am too attached to my friends. I have few friends from my childhood and as the days add our bond becomes stronger. However, parallel to this I never stop looking forward to new people and new friends. So I believe old friends are more important but new friends have their separate roles.
To begin with, Why do I give more importance to an old friend? is that I can rely on them for anything, I can trust them completely. Our bond with someone becomes stronger and unattachable once we start showing faith in them, understand them, feel their company, and are always eager to meet soon, so likewise happens in friendship. Once these all phases have been achieved we start trusting them, we can share our deep thoughts because we know that the other person will not judge and will help in any situation. All this happens when we spend considerable time with another person and as the day passes that bond becomes unbreakable. Here I can share my friendship experience, with one of my friends, with whom I am attached since childhood, in my early days I used to share limited things, only those I feel these are okay to share because of the fear of judgment, conflicts and such negative aspect which inhibit me from sharing my thoughts, as we grow older we start to talk more and I felt we have the same mindset, same level of thinking and she is the one who understands me so well and from that realization, of course, that was not sudden, we started sharing every thought, every emotion. So I always believe that sharing and comforting old friends are most important.
To carry on, one another reason I believe in the same way is that old friends will always help us in making the best decision. The reason I hold this opinion is that as I stated they know us for a long time, and know every detail about us. Sometimes we could miss our detail but they remember everything about us because friends observe everything about each other. They know what decision is good and bad and most important if we take the wrong decision, only friends can correct us. I have experienced this when I was planning to do an internship I asked my friend about this and told them that I will do it from a government hospital because they have more cases but she told me to do it in private, as they have better guidance. However I did as I wanted and in between, I have to change the hospital because of the same reason I needed someone who can explain me things, then I asked my friend how do you know about this? she told me that I can't understand things by my own and she concluded on bases of my childhood learning, where she used to teach me and I had a habit of asking her every detail. So they know us very deeply.
To take this further I must include the factors that meeting new people is also necessary. When we go to a new place and do work in a different job then we always need someone with whom we can share our things. Old friends are there for us but when we have to talk about office stuff then obviously we need a friend who works there. Also if we create our nature as we will only talk to limited people and remain isolated then this factor may prohibit our growth. Always welcome new people into our lives, they will teach us new things, new experiences, and different cultures. For example, when I was doing my internship I was so friendly with seniors and my juniours, there I made a lot of friends with whom I used to go for parties and movies and the time was memorable. All-time went so peacefully without any conflicts as I had a very good bond with people and then important of all this I used to tell to my old friend. So these are reasons pairing with new friends is necessary.
To sum up I think both friends are important but for the genuine peace and understanding always go for an old friend because to the extent they understand us no one ever could.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Is
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...you know about this? she told me that I cant understand things by my own and she con...
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Suggestion: Also,
...ously we need a friend who works there. Also if we create our nature as we will only...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, likewise, look, may, so, then, well, for example, i feel, i think, of course, you know, to begin with, to sum up, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 32.0 13.8261648746 231% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.0286738351 218% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 138.0 43.0788530466 320% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3201.0 1977.66487455 162% => OK
No of words: 731.0 407.700716846 179% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37893296854 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.19971265256 4.48103885553 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40702174085 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 294.0 212.727598566 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.40218878249 0.524837075471 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 999.0 618.680645161 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.6214101634 48.9658058833 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.321428571 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1071428571 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46428571429 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 11.8709677419 194% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29801665976 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109920079942 0.076458572812 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119700802091 0.0737576698707 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227243139626 0.150856017488 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0883876790669 0.0645574589148 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 58.1214874552 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.42 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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