Overpopulation in many urban centres around the world is a major problem.
What are the causes of this and how can this problem be solved?
More and more villagers move to the city center because they believe there are more tremendous opportunities. The feasible solution for this is to provide jobs in the rural areas.
Since many young people tend to leave their village and travel to urban centers, they want to earn money in a big city to obtain a better life. That is to say, many large companies have set up their main offices in the capital city, for that reason a great number of employees needed to work there. By looking at this opportunity, the villagers have decided to come to the city. Taking Jakarta as an example, more than a half of this inhabitant comes from rural areas, and they expect to have jobs. Unfortunately, not all of them are able to get jobs, so this results in increasing the unemployment rates.
How to tackle this? Providing new vacancies seems to be the best solution to reducing the migration. The government can encourage multinational companies to open their numerous factories in the rural area by providing simply permitted operation policies, so many villagers can work in their own village without moving to other places. For instance, almost every district in West Kalimantan has one or two huge Palm Factories, therefore, young adults there do not want to leave their hometown. Evidently, the number of urbanisation in West Kalimantan is recorded as a low level.
To sum up, to decrease the population in big cities is by preparing a great number of job vacancies in the villages. If possible, authorities are supposed to support the huge companies to open their branches outside the city, hence young people being able to work in their own village.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 87, Rule ID: A_GREAT_NUMBER_OF_NN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'jobs'?
Suggestion: jobs
...ities is by preparing a great number of job vacancies in the villages. If possible,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, so, therefore, for instance, to sum up, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87985865724 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69134108021 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575971731449 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4987371028 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6428571429 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2142857143 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120277678409 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527636113096 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617442943487 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0675183741977 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364197791428 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.