Student learn far more with their teachers than other sources (the Internet or television). To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that students can gain more knowledge from from the internet and television than their teachers and professors. In my personal opinion, I completely agree with this statement.
To begin with, the internet is considered as the global data warehouse where there are limitless documents of all aspects of life while lessons in the classroom are curbed by fixed curricula. On websites, independent and self-motivated learners can look for what they are interested in, ranging from how to bake a chocolate cake or build a car model to even how to control an airplane. Even the most knowledgeable teacher becomes inferior to a computer connected to the World Wide Web. Moreover, the students can write, practice, and publish their ideas on internet sites and blogs to share them with everybody. Thus a student remains up to date with the regular way of present days and enriches his proficiency through practice.
Futhermore, the internet has a significant role in self-learning for a student. It can modify and help a student for learning without following the traditional monodimensional way. Search engines like Google, bing, yahoo provide well-researched articles for students to find a proper idea of anything. It saves students precious time and probable hazards of preparing a project. YouTube and many other sites serve the essential courses for students to spread learning everywhere. The internet will become the best friend of students as it provides the necessary study materials.
In conclusion, these day with a ocean of knowledge students need other sources such as the Internet or television to learn more and steadily.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: from
...e that students can gain more knowledge from from the internet and television than their ...
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Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...an their teachers and professors. In my personal opinion, I completely agree with this statement...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...and blogs to share them with everybody. Thus a student remains up to date with the r...
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Line 7, column 16, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'these days'?
Suggestion: this day; these days
...sary study materials. In conclusion, these day with a ocean of knowledge students need...
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Line 7, column 31, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...rials. In conclusion, these day with a ocean of knowledge students need other ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, thus, well, while, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29166666667 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94904061768 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651515151515 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2244296567 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7857142857 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325463281794 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104814058308 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0804231542947 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217574290067 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735183208521 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.