Some countries are struggling with an increase in the rate of crime . Many people think that having more police on streets is the only way to reduce crime. To what extent do you agree?
In recent years, law-breaking rates has undergone a dramatic increment. Some argue that the solely preventive measure is to enhance the police workforce on the streets. In my opinion, I do not concur with this statement.
There are several reasons as a result of crime infringement. Firstly, people have difficulty in overwhelming financial burden. They are coerced to turn into a offender as a last resort to earn a living for their livelihood. Secondly, the overexposure to the violent programmes is among the root reasons. In the proliferation of technology, approachability to the media outlets such as Youtube, Facebook,..may obviously go viral. Apart from the educational programmes, the uncensored displays associated with the agressiveness such as bloodshed, conjugal violence,... would be broadcasted rampantly. As a result, the excessive involvement without any restrictions could exert detrimental impact on physical and psychological sides,which provoke them to commit crimes.
There are a variety of feasibly crime-busting solutions. Firstly, the authorities should launch the campaign to heighten citizens' consciouness about the repercussions of perperation. For example, it is advisable for the educational agency to add the offense content into the teaching curriculum to eschew the juvenile delinquency. Secondly, free-of-charge policy and promoting manual jobs to the financially disadvantaged may be implemented.
To sum up, crime cases have been permeated in the civil society due mainly to aforementioned reasons. Except for police, a range of methods should be applied to prevent posing criminal threat to human.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2022-07-04 | ngannguyen2408 | 84 | view |
| 2022-07-04 | ngannguyen2408 | 56 | view |
- Some human activities have negative effects on plant and animal species Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem while others think effective measures can be taken to improve this situation Discuss both views and give your opinio 89
- Some people believe that no one should do the same job for all their working life Others argue that doing the same job brings advantages for individuals companies and society Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
- The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advanced technology which can prevent and solve the crime Do you agree or disagree 78
- In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating much fast food It is therefore necessary for governments to impose higher tax on this kind of food To what extent do you agree or disagree with this 56
- Every day millions of tons of food are wasted all over the world Why do you think this is happening And how can we solve this problem 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...workforce on the streets. In my opinion, I do not concur with this statement. Th...
^^
Line 2, column 157, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...l burden. They are coerced to turn into a offender as a last resort to earn a liv...
^
Line 2, column 402, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
... media outlets such as Youtube, Facebook,..may obviously go viral. Apart from the ...
^^
Line 2, column 403, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...media outlets such as Youtube, Facebook,..may obviously go viral. Apart from the e...
^^
Line 2, column 562, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...ess such as bloodshed, conjugal violence,... would be broadcasted rampantly. As a ...
^^
Line 2, column 729, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...pact on physical and psychological sides,which provoke them to commit crimes. There a...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... consciouness about the repercussions of perperation. For example, it is advisabl...
^^
Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... advisable for the educational agency to add the offense content into the teachin...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, apart from, except for, for example, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.79668049793 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.46197370899 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.692946058091 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1861775595 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1764705882 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1764705882 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64705882353 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115503788521 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0345015603219 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404039137173 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0664030196968 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02931484687 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.77 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.28 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.