Do you believe that experimentation on animals for scientific purposes is justified. Are there any alternatives to animal experimentation?
In this age of change, animal testings are implemented for scientific aims. From my standpoint, I would contend that it is unfair for some following reasons and a corresponding should be taken by goverments' intervention to alleviate the circumstance.
Firstly, animals rights are appeared in the existing years. Experimentation could bring about the agony on animals. Animals also have emotions, perception like human. As a result, once being experimented, they are likely to manifest outwardly by licking the wound, whining, or seeking shelter even feeling uncomfortable.
Secondly, experimenting animals is likely to push to the verge of extinction. This can be explained by the fact that leading animals to conduct from a source of novel drug or to seek for the information has a tendency to allow a plethora of unexpected deaths. This can be seen in case that a controversial experiment for animal cruelty was carried out in the 1950s by American professor Curt Richter. He caused the loss of hundreds of poor mice.
Fortunately, this problem could be tackled with the aid of governments as well as scientists. Firstly, it is advisable for an authority to take a financial stake to supply a substantial amount of equipment to carry out rather than on animals. Secondly, it is feasible to launch a campaign to encourge volunteers. Those only receive the drug at a small level, small enough to not cause dangerous physiological effects.
To sum up, it is haphazard to turn animals into a tool to experiment which threatens their life. Nevertheless, a measure involving the administration could be taken to resolve this matter. In the near future,it is predicted that with appropriate funding and implementation of the suggested measure, this issue would be ameliorated.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 207, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
... resolve this matter. In the near future,it is predicted that with appropriate fund...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, as a result, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20979020979 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20649769428 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625874125874 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.372531291 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6470588235 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8235294118 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173534488904 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558803931571 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578835365913 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933892580433 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527473098711 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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