Many people today, especially in the developed world, are choosing to have fewer children, or none at all.
Why is this happening, and do you think it is a good trend?
Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
It is worth pointing out that modern people, particularly dwellers of developed nations, have a tendency to give birth to a diminishing number of children. Some of them even choose not to have children. From my point of view, this social pattern results from various motivations and should be considered advantageous.
On the one hand, there is a variety of justifications for having fewer or no children. The first and foremost explanation is connected with the financial situation of modern families. It goes without saying that raising a child may be costly, especially in such a materialistic world that people are living in. Therefore, an increasing number of people are made up their minds to have fewer new-born so they can afford to have the child's comprehensive development. Another reason is in terms of health. People nowadays are late marriages and, therefore, late birth-givers. The aforementioned late childbirth often affects maternal fertility, leading to many congenital diseases for the baby. Down syndrome can be a dangerous case in point. Hence, many modern parents choose not to have or have fewer babies to protect the health of themselves and their children.
On the other hand, this can be believed to be a beneficial trend. Regarding the societal aspect, overpopulation is undoubtedly one of the most nerve-wracking issues these days. By having fewer or no children, people can effectively tackle this hassle as they are contributing to reducing the world's population and easing the burden on the government. On a personal level, having fewer children is synonymous with parents may have more time and affection for them. This can be the premise for these children to grow up to be better residents. By way of exemplifying, Families in some Asian countries, such as China or Vietnam, are encouraged to have only one or two children for "better rearing. "
In conclusion, having fewer or zero offspring are the direct consequence of late marriage and monetary issues, which are very prevalent in modern families. Then, it can be a good trend as it is an efficacious action for the overpopulation and it also enhances the quality of upbringing children, which latter allow them to grow to be better citizens
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 293, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...s they are contributing to reducing the worlds population and easing the burden on the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, regarding, so, then, therefore, well, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1884.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14754098361 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03584250145 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543715846995 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3784576118 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.65 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218177205173 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685148981272 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434833231807 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135841007362 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318266265402 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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