The mass media including TV, Radio and newspaper influence our society and shape our opinions and characters. What is your opinion?
one of the most conspicuous trend of today’s world is the colossal upsurge in the number of mass media which influence our society . there is a widespread worry that this will only lead to myriad concerns in one’s life . However , I entirely do not accept this and will explain why in this essay.
there are number of arguments in favour of my stance .The most preponderant one is that mass media can not only contribute to doing something but also lead to numberous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages being offered by topic , not only can one benefit more when it comes to being affective , but they can also enhace the productivity and standard of their life with much ease , efficacy and convenience . Needless to say , all these merits stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of a better life is concered.
Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proportion is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides only when one follow such a system , can one broaden their horizons, thus learning such essential attributes as responsibilities , dedication and perseverance , Hence , it is apparent that why many are in favour of topic.
In view of the arguments outlined above , one can conclude that , the benefits of topic are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1117.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 230.0 242.827586207 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85652173913 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70912179552 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595652173913 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.327519085 50.4703680194 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.111111111 104.977214359 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5555555556 20.9669160288 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.33497536946 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0561991495493 0.242375264174 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.029062836665 0.0925447433944 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670956232815 0.071462118173 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0350835451058 0.151781067708 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478853844105 0.0609392437508 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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