Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Many people find themselves in situations where they must accept what life has given them while others believe that they have to attempt and refine these situations. From my perspective, I strongly agree with the latter.
On the one hand, the idea of accepting the situation as it is when it comes to having some problem is reasonable for some extent. The first reason for this is the fear of failure and new challenges since they do not have the inclination to change their constant life. By accepting unfavorable situations, people may have a better sense of security. For instance, despite the fact that the current job does not give satisfaction, there is no guarantee that the new one can be more lucrative. In addition, these people usually have huge financial burdens on their shoulders like housing loans or monthly expenditures on children, to name a few. Consequently, it could be virtually impossible to pursue their dream.
On the other hand, there are a variety of reasons why I believe that people should do their best to move up in life. The main one is that the advancement of human civilization has been made by those who strongly argue that there are certainly ways to make their lives better. Thanks to its spirit, our life has seen the development of inventions such as the Internet, light bulls or smartphones. Furthermore, it is apparent that only by solving the existing problems, not by simply accepting them, can people discover their inner strength and live their lives to the fullest. For example, the writer and teacher named Nguyen Ngoc Ky who lost the use of his arms at the age of four but he never left his life to fate and continued to try to use his legs in order to become successful. Therefore, I believe that in most cases, the effort to better unfavorable situations would be an incentive.
In conclusion, although in some cases, making changes sometimes seems quite hazardous, in the vast majority of instances, not only does this action bring about great success but also help our life becoming more meaningful. For that reason, I agree that striving to change dissatisfied situations is a much more sensible approach.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in most cases, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1794.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84864864865 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69680979183 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589189189189 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1449055819 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.125 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6875 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189361180556 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592887526876 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501307898045 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106272298942 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382146975529 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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